metalfoxfire (metalfoxfire) wrote in writers_soup,
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This is something I wrote earlier today, I got the idea for it yesterday. It's of a relatively dark topic but I really like the way I found to convey it. Not in any way my best but I still like the idea...now lets see if I did the little link thingy right ^.^



To the Block

Her arms into tools, into blades, into death

He cuts into the skin
The fire of the pain flows like a stream

To the wires
Grip is lost on reality

To the frame
Cracking connection to self

To the black
Clean and smooth

Drowning in the red sea…

5-2-06
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